Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know what is happening around the world, even if it does not affect your personal lives.
It is no secret that every second many different happenings occur all around the world. In this regard, some people are inclined toward this opinion that as long as those happenings are irrelevant to their personal life it is not essential to be aware of them whereas others hold exactly the opposite perspective and believe that everybody should care about those happenings. From my vantage point, the latter’s advantages carry more weight. In the following paragraphs, I will elaborate on my viewpoint through two noticeable reasons.
First, one should take into account the fact that without a shadow of doubt, political decisions play prominent roles in every individual’s life. It is crystal clear that politicians attempt to make their decisions based on their present society’s situation. Therefore, it is of paramount importance to be aware of the decisions’ consequences. To shed light on this issue, two years ago, my uncle obtained a great profit from his trade. Since he was not aware of the political news and situation, he decided to save his money in a bank and get interests. Two months later, the price of gold raised surprisingly. As a result, my uncle felt that how a big mistake he made with his money. Had he known about the political situation at that time he would have achieved a huge profit. This event has shown him that although the political issues had not had a direct effect on his personal life, by having information about different political decisions he could have got a better financial condition.
Another equally noteworthy point supporting this opinion is that every society is involved with different social problems. It is widely accepted that some social problems can cause many problems in society, which may not have an impact on people’s private lives directly. As an example to illustrate this matter, consider poverty as one of the important social problems. In fact, if everybody was not aware of being poverty in their society, they would not sustain any difficulty in their lives. But, as a human, it is everybody’s responsibility to participate effectively to diminish and gradually eliminate this issue of our society. Hence, there are many other samples of various social issues such as children’s labor, defending women’s rights, to name but a few. Although these problems are not involved with people’s lives, they need public awareness and collaboration in order to cope with them.
To wrap it up, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that it is a must for everybody to broaden their awareness of different happenings around the world, which not only enhances their knowledge and information but also helps them have more impressive and effective cooperation in solving different issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 35, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
It is no secret that every second many different happenings occur all around the world. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, second, so, therefore, whereas, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2361.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 453.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2119205298 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00268143253 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569536423841 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 760.5 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.2596418346 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.428571429 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52380952381 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0826705401312 0.236089414692 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0256629501716 0.076458572812 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316198200252 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0569253815627 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240941753493 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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