Playing videos games can have more negative effects on children.
Without a shadow of doubt, in this era of science and technology, almost every child has easy access to computers and smart phones. In this regard, it is generally observed that students spend most of their time on gadgets. While some people think that it is beneficial for children to use these gadgets, others are inclined to believe that it is harmful for them to be dependent on technology. Personally, I concur with the latter opinion that technology has derogatory effects on children. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the reasons and examples to substantiate my stance.First, playing these types of video games can have negative consequences, not only on mental health but also on physical health. To elucidate, such games usually involve violent acts, the use of guns by players, and fights. This will cause children to act in aggressive and rude ways, and in addition to this, it is often heard that children get involved in frequent fights with their peers. My recent experience is a good case in point. My little brother is always busy playing such kinds of video games and whenever he goes out to play outdoor games, he always ends up fighting with his friends. This is how these games are having a negative effect on young people.Second, spending excessive time sitting in front of computers and laptops has a detrimental effect on their eye sight and posture. The computers expose them to harmful blue light rays, which will affect their eyes and skin as well. Such children are at higher risks of developing harmful ailments like cancer, short-sightedness, depression, etc. One of my friends, Ria, was fond of such video games but unfortunately ended up having depression as she used to remain locked inside her room and never talk with anyone else.In conclusion, I would like to reaffirm my viewpoint that playing video games in excess can have a harmful effect on children. To recapitulate, it will affect their mental as well as physical health. Hence, due to the aforementioned reasons, I believe that children should be deterred from using or playing these games.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, second, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9433427762 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75273073563 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583569405099 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1465682809 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.333333333 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5333333333 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343904888136 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908169588806 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0989119733241 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.343904888136 0.150856017488 228% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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