Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Submitted by DR UROOSA on Mon, 04/29/2019 - 13:06

In my opinion, young people are the backbone of any society. Youth holds the utmost importance in the formation of any society. Youngsters are flourishing in all walks of life. The adolescents and youngsters are the heart beat of any nation. The valour and zest in any society is due to the presence of youth of that society. The main source of liveliness and cheerfulness lies in the heart of youth of a nation.

Today, with the expansion of democracy and New World Order, the youth has been facilitated with many rights and options. The young people are more free in all aspects of society to take part and excel more than ever.
Today, youth has been equipped with knowledge, right to vote and right to marry according to their own will. The youth is more active and dynamic than they ever were.

Moreover, whether it is science and technology, arts and humanities, teaching, social services or any other domain they are found in equal numbers. Youth is exceeding in politics, participating in social reform communities, organizations in a much more efficient and serious way.
For example, the young doctor's association in my country is comprised of young and zealous doctors bringing so many reforms for the benefit of doctor's community.

Moreover, emphasizing on the social service aspect of youth. They are spread so widely in the domain of community service and volunteering for
noble cause. The idea of world having a peaceful future seems like a reality.
Those days are not far when this younger generation will be in the World leadership and shaking hands with each other earnestly. Whichever, church, mosque, ngo, hospital, old-age home, one points to majority of volunteering is done by young people. Youth is the main force running the social service departments.

Furthermore, whether it is astronomy or rocket science we see many young people eagerly interning and playing their role. In concerns of science and research young people are more passionate and curious than any other age group. They are the ones exhilarated with the idea of discovery and to
benefit the diseased and destitute.

Conclusively, it is the youth which is the most motivated and energetic lot with a lot of concern and empathy for the miserable and suffering people. In this war era, where genocide and bloodshed is everywhere, young people are not just eager to help but are booming with passion and valor to help the injured and manage for calamities.

So, in strong disagreement with the presented statement, I can proudly say that young people nowadays are much more participating in helping the communities and serving humanity than ever before

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 327, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... the presence of youth of that society. The main source of liveliness and cheerfuln...
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Line 8, column 24, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'doctors'' or 'doctor's'?
Suggestion: doctors'; doctor's
...d serious way. For example, the young doctors association in my country is comprised ...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 58, Rule ID: IS_COMPRISED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of' or 'is composed of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of; is composed of
...young doctors association in my country is comprised of young and zealous doctors bringing so m...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 14, column 293, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arated with the idea of discovery and to benefit the diseased and destitute. C...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 13.8261648746 210% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2229.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 441.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05442176871 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71289583019 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50566893424 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 693.0 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.256298886 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.16 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.64 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.48 5.45110844103 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.53405017921 265% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123927064359 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0322722250884 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385329503487 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0473865497474 0.150856017488 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445564103912 0.0645574589148 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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