Some believe that one should spend more time being far away from the people we care about, because it is necessary for people to understand the importance of relationship of people we care about, while others think being away from people we care about can damage our relationships with them. Which one do you agree with? Why?
From a broad perspective, in the current states of affairs we face, in which so complex is the communication among people that it is difficult to find true relationships, it is not far-fetched to presume that the relatives and close friends play crucial role in order to cope with this problem. However, to which what extent they should spend time with each other is considered as a contentious issue. There is a growing segment of people who contend that the more time spend people pass with their dears, the worst their relations become. I personally repudiate this idea and in the ensuing paragraph, the rationale behind this statement will be further elaborated.
First and foremost, the prominence of keeping the close ties. There is no denying the fact that human encountered a great revolution with the advent of the Internet. Indeed, aside from its positive consequences which is undoubtedly the easier way for talking, lack of effective communication can be accounted as the negative ramification of this event. Nowadays, individuals no longer are inclined to have face-to-face meeting, instead they opt to plug their laptop and do Skype with the others. Therefore, family relationships learn them regarding the importance of establishing constructive relationship with whom they care about. In fact, this aim will not come true even if they spend remarkable amount of time in order to get acquainted with each other's temper and characteristics. Subsequently, in this circumstance they will be able to support each other in any needed case.
Another vital point which should be taken into consideration is that having constant relationships is an integral part of social life. Needless to say that human is a social creature and it necessitates to build stable relationships regardless of their types. Actually, individuals require a wide array of connections which each one requires its own specific treat. Having spent more time, people find more mutual interests to share, and that is why rarely do people feel sympathy for their neighbors' death. On the other hand, they give a sense of intense grief for losing their close friends. According to the latest research attributing to Dr. Kevin Ride, a prominent and highly respected professor in the Department of sociology in Macquarie University, most of the long-term friendships coming from the colleagues who are closely working with each other. This probe provides further legitimacy for this idea that shortage of spending time probably ends up with superficial relations or in the other words it renders close relations vulnerable.
To wrap it up, it is more judicious to say that human should try their best to keep in touch with the people who have specific position in their life. This issue is not only important due to paucity of quality in today's communication, but it also hinders a person from constructing the precious connections which are an inevitable part of their nature.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 753, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...me in order to get acquainted with each others temper and characteristics. Subsequentl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2478.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 480.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1625 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93036959652 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55625 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 766.8 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8153204774 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.9 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.65 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22545372457 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061503935713 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052992549277 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135827271976 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039212163934 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 86.8835125448 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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