TPO 37.Do you agree or disagree with the following statements？ Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
We live in a hectic life, where our job consumes the majority of our time. With the increased demands of our jobs, people now tend to handle many tasks at the same time. Some people think that workers are unable to do multi-tasks efficiently; others disagree. In my opinion, multi-tasking will lead to job disasters as people will not perform all the tasks in a professional manner.
To begin with, in order to perform your work in an excellent way, people have to spend much time in every mission. Dividing your time into multiple tasks will lead to less focus on each one. As a result, the workers will end up by having only a few good projects. For example, five years ago, I used to work in an advertising company called ABC. We used to handle the jobs by dividing them between five employees. One day, one of our employees took a day off because he was sick. Consequently, his job is shifted to us which increased the amount of work every one of us has to do. Unfortunately, this project has a time limit, so we had to finish the job within five days. Each of my co-workers has already a myriad of missions to finish during this period. However, with the increased workload we were not able to give every task the time it deserves. As you can imagine, we failed to finish at the required time, which affected our image in front of our client. This experience taught me that increase workload would affect the quality of your job.
In addition, Increased the tasks you handle leave no place to ask if you do not understand something. As you do not have time to waste on trivial things, you may intentionally omit some small details to finish your tasks quickly. However, these small details may affect the quality of your project leaving you with a poorly developed work that requires more concern. This may have a detrimental effect on you and your company. For instance, If an architect has to work in many projects at the same time, some times he may leave some essential details unclear. Such as the width of the windows or the size of the door, or any measurement. Therefore, this egregious act may lead to a tremendous effect on the building the company is working on. As you can see, multi-jobs affect your work causing severe consequences.
To conclude, although some people think that they are able to manage a myriad of tasks at the same time. Personally, I think that in order to keep the quality of our job, we should work on one task at a time. By doing so, we will have enough time to master each task and to avoid the harmful effects of multi-tasking.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 358, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a professional manner" with adverb for "professional"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...s people will not perform all the tasks in a professional manner. To begin with, in order to perform ...
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Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an excellent way" with adverb for "excellent"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...gin with, in order to perform your work in an excellent way, people have to spend much time in ever...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, may, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2114.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 468.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51709401709 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52886037174 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482905982906 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 670.5 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.6188215587 48.9658058833 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.2962962963 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14106028224 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445997790028 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410514908877 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946960835258 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233451770243 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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