TPO 45: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Today, young people are able to make decisions about their own lives better than before. Therefore, I personally agree that in the past, young people depended on their parents to make their decisions. My three main seasons will be elaborated as follows.
First of all, in the past, there was no enough literacy among people. Thus, people could not study books to gain some skills and they transferred their experiences to each other. In that situation, parents could be one of the best sources to learn from them.
Second, many years ago, information was not as today. We know that today young people easily read books, search on the internet and so on. By these means, they can learn many skills from other people and even share their experiences to others. This leads that young people be more confident to current information to take their decisions instead of relying on their parents. For example, young people make decision to get marry by learning more about their fiance through Facebook or other existing social sites.
Finally, nowadays, there exist many psychologist who help not only young people, but also parents to make a decision. For instance, when young people intend to go to universities, they consult to a psychologist. The psychologist takes some tests and finds better interests of students than what parents may pursue.
In conclusion, in my opinion, young people are more private to make their decisions alone, without relying on their parents, than they did in the past because the lack of literacy, information and new technologies, and existent of psychologists who really help us to make a suitable decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, may, really, second, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 272.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09558823529 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57532500385 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580882352941 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.800811024 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 5.45110844103 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42099508621 0.236089414692 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14944751748 0.076458572812 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13357040933 0.0737576698707 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249222776443 0.150856017488 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132665551961 0.0645574589148 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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