Should government spend more money on improving roads and highways, or on improving public transportation (buses, trains, subways)? Why? Use specific reasons to develop your essay.
Assessment of a modern society related to the percentage of people who use public transportation or not. Nowadays there is an important debate about having a personal car or using other alternatives such as buses, trains, etc. personally, I believe the government should spend more money on something like metro that can be used by most of the people not only some of them who has their own cars. I feel this way for two main reasons, that I will explore in the following lines.
First of all, air pollution has been a great issue currently which made it hard for many parts of the society to use roads in the city for walking, jogging or biking. personal vehicles are really important in this matter, to make the air polluted. On the other hand, public transportation is a safe way to reduce the hazardous of the things that a car releases to the air. my personal experience is a compelling example of this, 4 years ago, I was living in the middle of a crowded town in which all the people used to have their own cars, hence, the air pollution made me sick and I left the place to more healthy.
Secondly, there are more costs for a government to pay to improve the roads and highways, indeed it can't be a suitable deal for them because a single road most be saved all the time by the money of the government, However, people in all of the countries most pay to use public transportation. For instance, In my country, people do not have to pay for any road into and outside of cities, but all kinds of public transportation costs for the people, so it makes money for the government.
To sum up, I am of the opinion that government should spend more money on developing a matter which is same for most of the people, such as public transportation, this is because of effects of personal cars on pollution of the air and because of the increase of the cost to pay for the government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Personally
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Personal
...he city for walking, jogging or biking. personal vehicles are really important in this m...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
... things that a car releases to the air. my personal experience is a compelling exa...
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Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...prove the roads and highways, indeed it cant be a suitable deal for them because a s...
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Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'cants'?
Suggestion: cants
...prove the roads and highways, indeed it cant be a suitable deal for them because a s...
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Line 5, column 234, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, really, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, such as, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 30.3222958057 168% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 5.01324503311 339% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1373.03311258 113% => OK
No of words: 348.0 270.72406181 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43965517241 5.08290768461 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65435593507 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 145.348785872 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488505747126 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 419.366225166 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 21.2450331126 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.884152954 49.2860985944 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.454545455 110.228320801 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6363636364 21.698381199 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9090909091 7.06452816374 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218916299303 0.272083759551 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819554569393 0.0996497079465 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584240879249 0.0662205650399 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138725537077 0.162205337803 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438398434919 0.0443174109184 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.3589403974 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 53.8541721854 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.0289183223 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 12.2367328918 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.42419426049 89% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 63.6247240618 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.498013245 137% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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