Forest are the lungs of the earth. Destruction of the world’s forests amount to the death of the world. We currently know to what extent do you agree or disagree?
We live in technological era, in which human cut down the number of trees to adapt the lifestyles. But, we have to take care of trees due to prevent from ends of the world that we currently know.
First of all, the requirement of folk swelled day by day and so, they cut trees continuously. Deforestation is the biggest threat of environment. Our climate has been change because of the deforestation. If lugs are important for our body, then forest are also plays vital role for our universe. Now days, we can see that, temperature of atmosphere has been increase day by day. From that effect, the level of water in ocean falls down in each year.
Albeit, in recent situation agriculture growth decrease due to the need of rain. Deforestation not only leads to extinct of creature but also lead to lack of monsoon. If his things happened constantly then world will face the challenge of death.
On the flip side, in modern era, we have to get high lifestyle and for that purpose we have to cut trees, compulsory. With the help of cut down trees, we can get development in countries. The use of paper sheet excess day by day and it’s the boon of trees only. But, we should plant some trees against cut down trees. Actually, how we selfish about the only use the trees to use for healthy life style. We have to know the value of trees.
To pen down, I would like to say that, If we “save the trees, then trees will save us.” And also, the use of trees constantly, forwarding our world towards death.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.247678018576 0.247107183377 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.139318885449 0.155533422707 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0557275541796 0.0946595960268 59% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0526315789474 0.0501214627716 105% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0588235294118 0.0437548338989 134% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.139318885449 0.122226691241 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0216718266254 0.0403226058552 54% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.54036894568 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0371517027864 0.0326793684256 114% => OK
Particles: 0.015479876161 0.00163938923432 944% => OK
Determiners: 0.0712074303406 0.0861772015684 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0185758513932 0.021408717616 87% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0061919504644 0.011925033212 52% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1633.0 1933.35771543 84% => OK
No of words: 275.0 316.048096192 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.93818181818 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.229090909091 0.374742101984 61% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.163636363636 0.28420135186 58% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.116363636364 0.203846283523 57% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0981818181818 0.137316102897 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54036894568 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.037074148 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556363636364 0.56093040696 99% => OK
Word variations: 56.5677039951 60.7387585426 93% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.2777777778 20.7743622355 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.057147216 49.517814964 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7222222222 127.492653851 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2777777778 20.7743622355 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.814263465372 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.99599198397 150% => OK
Readability: 31.6414141414 49.1944974215 64% => OK
Elegance: 1.62962962963 1.69124875643 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.494841297105 0.332605444948 149% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0975710828251 0.102741220458 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0640347201976 0.0668466124924 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.565792117273 0.534860350844 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.156849986526 0.148594505496 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.21742911843 0.134430193775 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103238856363 0.0742795772207 139% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.306113755984 0.324371583561 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0759761661434 0.0638462369009 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.351034276738 0.228012699653 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535376392387 0.058150111329 92% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.