A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
The issue consisted to the national cirriculum for the all students in to primary base to provided to same .The statment of author agree with the students to study of any nation provides the same carriculum ,beacause of the students are in schools they are to teach the nation and other languages.however ,the points of the statments are agree with the author for national carriculum.
Firstly ,the statment of the study for the carriculum for all nation same to agree with the points because of in the schools time they are to study in different languages then to enter in the college life to faces some problems.In example of the some students in schools to study in own religion languages and them enter the college to differernt languages to problems are there.
Secondly,the benifite of the same carriculum of the nation to provide the great improvments in the students who all of them are to know the same knowledges and to entire growth are increases.
Thirdly,The statments of the same national carriculam provide to that nations of the knowledges to adding the some extra information to teach the students for benifite for the students.
In conclution , author five to point of the same caariculum in schools for the all nation to benifite to all students who enter the college to easier to agnomoration .
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.266949152542 0.240241500013 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.110169491525 0.157235817809 70% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0847457627119 0.0880659088768 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.021186440678 0.0497285424764 43% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0169491525424 0.0444667217837 38% => OK
Prepositions: 0.14406779661 0.12292977631 117% => OK
Participles: 0.00847457627119 0.0406280797675 21% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.81127887071 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.101694915254 0.030933414821 329% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.182203389831 0.0997080785238 183% => Less determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.0249443105267 0% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00847457627119 0.0148568991511 57% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1326.0 2732.02544248 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 225.0 452.878318584 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.89333333333 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.58838876751 84% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.337777777778 0.366273622748 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.271111111111 0.280924506359 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.208888888889 0.200843997647 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.124444444444 0.132149295362 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81127887071 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 219.290929204 38% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.368888888889 0.48968727796 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 32.046552479 55.4138127331 58% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6194690265 24% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 45.0 23.380412469 192% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 99.5308997247 59.4972553346 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 265.2 141.124799967 188% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.0 23.380412469 192% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.0 0.674092028746 297% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.21349557522 326% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 72.1111111111 51.4728631049 140% => OK
Elegance: 2.82857142857 1.64882698954 172% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.440604219657 0.391690518653 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.529917793073 0.123202303941 430% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0788793450982 0.077325440228 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.547984918172 182% => Sentence paragraph similarity is high.
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 1.40433338743e-16 0.149214159877 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.351289256102 0.161403998019 218% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315393462428 0.0892212321368 35% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.613631001651 0.385218514788 159% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0792455885795 0.0692045440612 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.351289256102 0.275328986314 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315393462428 0.0653680567796 48% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.4325221239 29% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 7.22455752212 42% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 13.5995575221 37% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.