Essay topics: TPO-41 - Independent Writing Task
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are certain considerations or factors which everyone can take into account to investigate and examine how estimation of teachers' work in contemporary society has changed over time. I certainly believe that nowadays educators are less appreciated and valued by public than they used to be. Someone can consciously weigh the pros and cons of each side. The explanations go as follows.
Firstly, a role of education and knowledge has slumped tremendously at the end of the twenty century. Since the technological revolution of XIX century the role of education was enormous and it was widely and unquestionably associated with lucrative work and a possibility to get a better life. In fact, a person with a college degree surely was able to find a job and his income was up to ten times higher than one of an average farmer. However, today this connection has weakened because people can witness that a diploma or a college degree does not automatically lead to employment and other benefits. Thus the role of educators who used to be seen as a key to a better life has lost its value.
Secondly, in the past teachers were perceived as only available source of knowledge. In fact, in the past there was no obvious options, if you want to get a new skill, profession or knowledge, you will have to pay attention to your teacher who by default knows the subject better then you. Additionally to it, there was a shortage of good textbooks and they were really expensive. Today information, knowledge is widely available and cheap. In fact, a person with a laptop may unearth all needed data on-line and in no costs.
Admittedly, there are some justifications by one who argues that teachers' work is more appreciated by the today's society than it was in the past. Chiefly, this stance is made by people from rural and removed areas who claim that teachers are respected and prized by the locals. However, still I affirm that the attitude to educators has worsen in average because even in those rural areas the attitude to teachers will alter after such modern technology as the internet, computers, which currently unavailable in some regions, will arrive to the remote areas.
Due to aforementioned ground, the attitude to teachers' role in contemporary society has surely worsened and in average people are prone to appreciate their toil less than in the past.
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The content of the essay
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This is my essay. I only used
This is my essay. I only used the template which was used by vhb. Previosly I used the template which I picked from the textbook.
There may be similar into but the rest is completely different.
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There are certain considerations or factors which everyone can take into account to investigate and examine how estimation of teachers' work in contemporary society has changed over time. I certainly believe that nowadays educators are less appreciated and valued by public than they used to be. Someone can consciously weigh the pros and cons of each side. The explanations go as follows.
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There are some considerations or factors that everyone can take into account to investigate and examine teachers' situation and position in the society. I certainly agree that teachers were more valued in the past. Someone can consciously weigh the pros and cons of each side. The explanations go as follows.
Note the content is completely different. The explantions go as follows were not invented by him.
Of course, if it is prohibited, I will not use the temple in the future, but I would like that the essay which were written today will be checked because I am conserned with the results and I am really short of time.
p.s. I would like to know what do you consider as copy and paste. I assume that you mean a pirate law so what are the rules?
Essay evaluation report
flaws:
use the template in your own risk.
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 27 in 30 //the score doesn't consider the template
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 402 350
No. of Characters: 1921 1500
No. of Different Words: 213 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.478 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.779 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.775 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 136 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 102 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 65 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 47 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.247 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.286 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.533 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.064 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Ok. Please may you underscore
Ok. Please may you underscore or highlight the problematic parts of this essay? as I previously said, I do respect your work, experise and opinion. So, may you be more specific about the trouble.
I am mostly concerned with the body paragraphs. Are they good enough?
No any flaws found in the
No any flaws found in the body part if we don't consider the templates. Basically, you don't have any issues in TOEFL essays, you create problems by your own because of the templates.
Can I use this template to
Can I use this template to see how much I can score?
Yes, you can try it out. But
Yes, you can try it out. But templates are used for beginners. Once you got the point, you need to use you own styles.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 607, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... lead to employment and other benefits. Thus the role of educators who used to be se...
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Line 5, column 274, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'better than'?
Suggestion: better than
...eacher who by default knows the subject better then you. Additionally to it, there was a sh...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 291, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...ault knows the subject better then you. Additionally to it, there was a shortage of good tex...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 107, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...eachers work is more appreciated by the todays society than it was in the past. Chiefl...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 338, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'worsened'.
Suggestion: worsened
...firm that the attitude to educators has worsen in average because even in those rural ...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 185, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ciate their toil less than in the past.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1974.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91044776119 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82963451952 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542288557214 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 653.4 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4880295487 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.666666667 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157385902541 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474793752372 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520061316007 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923381240528 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375624868069 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.