Some people say that self employment is better than a job in a company or an institution.
Jobs are always important for a matured man. We can say jobs as an output of our hard works in the time of education. It will be always a debatable question for a person to choose jobs or self-business. In my opinion, i believe Company or institutional jobs are always safer.
The reasons because if we are working for someone, it doesn't need any investments and there will be a fixed salary based on our performance. Risk factors will be very less compared to own businesses. Since we are getting a stable monthly salary. We are having superior power to leave and join another if environments is not good or we are having more pressure targets. However, in this scenario, we must improve day by day in the professional field. As we already familiar that there are amper number of educated candidates are waiting for jobs, if we are not improving or have profound knowledge in the subject, the company can terminate your Contract.
On the other hand, if people are starting their own business. They can pin point their own targets. They can work in their flexible timings. Individuals having full freedom on their actions. We don't need to worry about our performances or nobody can terminate even though, as much as you can work hard, you can earn that much profit. Though there may be some investments needed in the beginning. moreover it will take some time to establish the business or start to earn their profits. There are a myriad number of competitions will be there in the field. all these can influence of your income.
To sum up, It will always personal interest and desire to choose whether start own business or work for someone. Each of this is two sides of a coin. Each of this need dedication, observation and self-preparation to achieve success
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7216828479 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71646946131 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540453074434 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3878300873 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.3181818182 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0454545455 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.40909090909 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100478150085 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0320538946193 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456672756168 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0710684685456 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773820404872 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 12.4159519038 77% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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