The number of elderly people in the world is increasing. What do you think are the positive and negative effects of this trend?
There is an increasing number of older people in many countries around the world. I believe that this trend could have both negative and positive impacts on society.
The main disadvantageous effect relates to the anticipated additional financial costs for pensions, healthcare. In addition, government have to develop custodial services associated with older age structures such as nursing homes, hospitals, public transportation. Meanwhile, the number of young people could be highly decreased so that there will be not enough young people earning the money and paying taxes. The budget on the social security is getting higher and higher while the growing amount of tax income from young labour is more and more decreasing. Thus, the ageing population create a significant economic burden in these countries.
There are also advantages to having an older population, these are often overlooked. The elderly people, obviously, are more experienced and exceptional in certain areas than younger generation and so the society can benefit from them. For example, health practitioners who are aged over 50 year-old are more likely highly-skilled than young doctors. This is because they have studied more cases as their age rose, which means that they not only cure the conventional health problems but also treat some usual diseases with alternative therapies. The second positive effect is that ageing population encourages more young immigrants because of open border policies, especially developed countries like Britain or American. These immigration policies will help draw top talent in other countries and improve public finances.
In conclusion, the increase in older population will have both beneficial and detrimental consequences on economy and on society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, second, so, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63805970149 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88267218965 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638059701493 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5597370344 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.928571429 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127415827713 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444438227677 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630168618988 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971000988459 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106319639892 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.