Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news & awareness and for some
it acts like a companion. What is your opinion about this?
There is a significant increase in number of gadgets such as TV, smart phones and other forms of media produced annually thanks to inventions of technology these days. A vast majority of news and education programs are broadcast via these devices makes them crucial to our lives. I completely agree with this opinion.
Teams of engineers and scientists have worked together for long time to create such elegant, convenient and user-friendly devices. They spent a considerable period to invent those gadgets at a reasonable prices and material which can be easily purchase by a number of people worldwide. In addition, an increase in myriad of residents possess those machines attributes to a decrease in amount of money people paid to possess. For example, it was very expensive to buy a tivi twenty years ago. There might be only one family had a tivi and opened it every evening around one hour so that the whole town could enjoy that moment. The more citizens can afford such gadgets, the more popular they are.
A huge quantity of channels for people at ages, in different regions and at various time frames are broadcast to serve the world better. For instance, children can watch kid channels in their own first language, or in another language. Adults watch programs to learn about business or news, or simply to entertain, whereas teenager can watches channels to teach how to live healthily and how to take care of themselves. Myriad things available for many genres of people satisfy their own taste.
In conclusion, TV has become an important part of our lives in many aspects such as education and entertainment because of its popularity in community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 337, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'watch'
Suggestion: watch
...mply to entertain, whereas teenager can watches channels to teach how to live healthily...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98214285714 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65364352911 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5358831835 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6428571429 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108531408997 0.242375264174 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360485601493 0.0925447433944 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342799795794 0.071462118173 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704892234935 0.151781067708 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030748953538 0.0609392437508 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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