Nowadays children spend more time playing computer games than doing sports why is it happening? Does it have a positive or negateive effect on thier development?
Physical playing has an imperative role in the psychological and physical development at the initial stage of younger ones. However, modernization and urbanization have replaced the concept of outdoor sports with the indoor gaming which has increased the count of couch potatoes in the current generation.In my view, it is absolutely a negative trend that threatens not only physical condition but also a mental growth of the children.
Firstly, urbanization has removed many street playgrounds from the existing town planning Including all the modern construction which are developed more congested and leaving no space for the children to enjoy their outdoor sports like cricket, football and so on. More to it, playing such sports in narrow streets has started causing disturbance to the so-called modern residentials which enforced the parents to keep their children in houses and inspire them to play inside the home only. Moreover, security of children has also become a major concern for the parents who both are struggling to earn a better life in the currently terrifying situation of world inflation.Hence, most of the parents facilitate their kids with a computer, mobile or video game to keep them captivated and busy inside the home.
As a consequent, children are getting detached from the many benefits of playing outdoor sports. To illustrate, playing sports can keep them physically strong and help their organs to grow and function properly. Moreover, physical stretch can also expand the horizon of cognitive abilities of vulnerable in terms of problem-solving, decision-making and so on which will possibly be diminished due to not exposing to outdoor activities. Finally, sporting develops many other crucial skills of life like a team playing, winning and losing with grace, learning from failures etc where a new generation will be lacking due to the loss of contact from the outdoor games.
To conclude, playing indoor games might be giving some brainstorming, however, a physical exertion is vital for the overall build up of kids. So, I strongly believe that sparing much time on computer games can be very harmful to the upcoming generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31304347826 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93271746986 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597101449275 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.4479613797 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.636363636 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3636363636 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173338838891 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686136878074 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033408357271 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105305592752 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216191404232 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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