Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.
The question is whether nowadays teaching children is more formidable than past or not. Everyone in consideration to his private view point and perspective toward society can maintain a specific direction to this statement; however I am inclined to affirm the mentioned issue and believe that several factors are playing a crucial role in creating such frustrating circumstance such as technology, the parents, the psychologists and so on. Nevertheless, I feel this way for some reasons, which I will explore them in following essay to empower my vantage point:
To begin with, nobody could overlook that in a comparison with the past, the population of families has reduced today's and the overwhelming majority of households include one or two kids; hence, providing the needed facilities of children does not account as heavy burden. Besides, the technology has been keeping marching forward; hence, it has changed people's life in several ways. In the recent years, the invention of tablets, smart phones, the most up-dated computer has caused children to become an idol character and unfortunately they are not be able to concentrate their studies.
The second reason for my argument lies in the reality that needless to say that internet includes a wide range of information; therefore, the young kids usually access a variety of data in a short-time. Such a condition can alter children's personality in a way that aforementioned generation will become mature as soon as possible. Unlike the past, the families do not need to notify their beasts about basic information; consequently, the egotism - this unacceptable behavior- will appear and children will prefer not to ask question any more in the classrooms because they refute their teacher's opinions simply; in the other hand, teachers will also have difficulties to make students convinced in accepting ideas and concepts.
Moreover, one not should forget that psychologists have affected this situation. Their theories have led parents to interfere in the relationship between their children and teachers. For instance, take my own brother. Whenever, his teacher gives him extra assignment as punishment, my mother starts complaining the manager of school; subsequently, the manager will talk his teacher to make my mother satisfied.
To sum up, this conclusion could be drawn that I strongly agree that teachers confront a hard situation compared with the past era. In the recent years, the children's personality have become a selfish person due to gaining enough information through internet and also the psychologists' advice - such as the punishment can have negative impacts on students' spirit even in low rates -.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
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Line 10, column 273, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'psychologists'' or 'psychologist's'?
Suggestion: psychologists'; psychologist's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, hence, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2269.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37677725118 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95322145377 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60663507109 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 697.5 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 13.0 3.08781362007 421% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.758508644 48.9658058833 234% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 162.071428571 100.406767564 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1428571429 20.6045352989 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2142857143 5.45110844103 206% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121957719643 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381553951302 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394741071859 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0631062663862 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279805641012 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 11.7677419355 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 58.1214874552 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.1575268817 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 10.9000537634 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.01818996416 125% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 86.8835125448 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.247311828 185% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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