In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent.
Why do you think this is and what can be done about it?
It is irrefutable that the numbers of the offender are increasing and the offence becomes more furious among society in many countries. There are the plethoras of causes of accruing crime in society. I would elaborate briefly and suggest few steps to minimise prevailing problem in the forthcoming essay.
First and foremost, IN the wake of globalisation and revolutionized modern technology, life becomes much easier than before. It is the boom for mankind but when it goes to on wrong-hand it plays role of curse. More to it, in this fast-paced era people befall more materialistic so they tend to take steps to satisfy their desire. For example, in corporate world, many women employee make extramarital affairs with boss just to climb corporate ladder or many youngsters commit, robbery or murder just to sort out their monetary needs.
To suggest remedies, the government should take steep steps to mitigate the violence and society should support in it. To exemplify, driving an awareness camp in schools and collage for guiding parents and students together about the type of offences and rescue plans, moreover, the government should set strict punishment against serious culprits like death penalty. Additionally, people also need to be aware about their surrounding and should help each other.
In conclusion, I opine that the government and the society both have to play important role to demise the number of criminals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, first, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2380952381 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77355763458 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649350649351 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5954625085 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127402931789 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450048676225 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477350922424 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0665965468846 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537332621772 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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