Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. Your opinion? Good or bad
The world has been converted into a globalized village.The moot question is, whether the large shopping malls are replacing the small shops. This essay will discuss both the aspects and my opinion to which holds more weight-age will be provided.
Firstly, the modern life is very busy.There are enormous advantages of shopping at the large complexes, one is able to find all the necessary items under one roof such as groceries, bakery, medicines,food-court, restaurants and cinemas, all are found together which is a great deal for the time saving as time is money. Also, one is able to shop in hygienic conditions under the air-conditioner. Due to the appealing presentation of the products and good offers, they attract a large number of customers towards them.
One major problem, the large shopping malls have is that the availability of the car parking spaces which are not generally empty during the peak hours such as on weekends and it wastes a lot of time. During the weekends, there is should be a good arrangement of security, as many teenagers can take it as a spot to conduct mischievous activities so only families should be allowed to enter in the premises. On the negative side, they have caused serious disturbance to the business of the small shops by establishing their monopoly. For example, in Singapore, many small retail shops were closed down due to these large shopping complex.
To wrap up, the large shopping malls are replacing the small shops due to more advantages but still, a low or average income earner will prefer to go to small shops.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, still, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94360902256 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86163329362 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59022556391 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.4513899041 50.4703680194 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.5 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 20.9669160288 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351813804356 0.242375264174 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132752314243 0.0925447433944 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106782733645 0.071462118173 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223677402094 0.151781067708 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089926301189 0.0609392437508 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 53.1260098522 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.