In the past 100 years, there have been many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes and
computers. What do you think is the most important of them? Why? Greatest invention in the last
100 years, medicine, science or technology?
The modern era is full of daily inventions. Every now and then there are rapid developments in the field of the information and technology. When we think about technology, the first thing that comes to our mind is the computer. This essay will discuss why the computers have been the greatest invention above all and will present reasons to support the viewpoints.
The computers possess the power of multitasking and their processing speed is being doubled every next year. With the help of the computers, one just needs to enter the value and the calculation is automatically done in no time. If a mistake is made in the document and needs to edit, so unlike the paper where one has to throw it off and rewrite the whole material again, computers have made it possible to edit the same document retaining the original version. One can store as many documents in the memory of the computer resulting in the reduction of the extra paper cost and space. The retrieval of any document or information is very convenient.
On a larger scale, like in the field of agriculture where once dozens and dozens of workers were required, fast-paced computers have resolved this issue. There is so much research done recently and experiments carried out in the field of medication for the betterment of the mankind.
In the nutshell, I would advocate that the computers have been the most beneficial and the greatest invention in the past 100 years and undoubtedly, no one can deny the various advantages they offer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: Now and then
...modern era is full of daily inventions. Every now and then there are rapid developments in the fie...
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Line 7, column 201, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...deny the various advantages they offer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86434108527 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71689944156 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585271317829 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9647890432 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.583333333 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 7.25397266985 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116778050315 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355436786264 0.0925447433944 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603993730543 0.071462118173 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825805594201 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712349448176 0.0609392437508 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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