Analysts tell us that many people today feel stressed and think they have insufficient control over their lives. What problems do such feelings cause for people? What remedies could you suggest?
Mental suffering and self-uncontrolled live nowadays have been found in some researches to lie in people’s health. Consequently, with some plausible reason, cause-solution explanation will be provided in this essay.
One of major causes which lie in people’s mental health is the demanding works. Nowadays, employees are facing difficulties causing high stress when applying for improper job with high salary, meaning that people undertake enormous tasks leading them to devote more time and effort in order to earn more money. As a result they do not have free time for relaxation. Another reasonable cause is that people have unsuitable spare time for whether their family or even themselves. This happens when they consider that leisure activity is unnecessary, in which time can be spent on earning money by work and more budgets are spent on. Thus, their brain will be tired and certainly suffer from mental health.
One of excellent suggestions is that worker apply for a proper job, in which the tasks are able to be properly tackled. By this we mean that employees should be wise to determine how many duties they can fulfill adequately in order to derive job satisfaction and take fairly-free time. The second solution to handle stress would be to take more leisure time, such as travel or vacation around beautiful landscape. People have to fully conscious that even travelling might be expected as wasting money and time, but this would be essential to avoid mental suffering.
Overall, it is logical to conclude that the exhausting tasks and less free time belonging will endure such mental suffering. And only after applying for proper job and taking vacation, will people relieve this undergoing pain.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, second, so, thus, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20430107527 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74377383497 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591397849462 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1857529873 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.714285714 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153777905775 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637108132895 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041923221091 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940863555151 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390737530502 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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