Communication has changed significantly in the last 10 years. Discuss pros and cons of this change.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s the dramatic change in communication. There are numerous advantages to this change, but there are some dire consequences too. This essay will discuss both advantages and drawbacks to this development.
To begin with, the change in way of communication has benefited lot to the mankind. Contacting a person these days have been very much time efficient. The person can be contacted with very few clicks on the phone. Nowadays, the video calling is gaining popularity among the people. People who are miles away from each other can see their beloved ones with negligible amount of time. For example, I can see my brother and talk to him when he is abroad and it is also cost effective. Today communication is unlike the previous days when people have to pay a lot of money to contact the person.
Nevertheless, there are some disadvantages to this technology. The most important is that the man has started being less anti-social. The person prefers to talk on the phone rather to meet him. By doing this the social values in one’s life is degraded. For example, In past on the occasions such as birthday or anniversary, the people get to gathered for the celebrations, but nowadays the people avoid meet ups and prefer to wish them on the phone.
In conclusion, there are both advantages and disadvantages to this development. I think that the advantages of change in communication outweigh the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9756097561 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01567938659 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577235772358 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2569438652 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0 104.977214359 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4705882353 20.9669160288 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141915892818 0.242375264174 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049633262795 0.0925447433944 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556576804792 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103599383292 0.151781067708 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640582990379 0.0609392437508 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 12.6369458128 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.9458128079 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 69.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 62.5 Out of 90
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