Dangerous activities like extreme skiing, bungee jumping, etc. and whether you support them or not.
The phenomenon of doing dangerous sports and its corresponding impact has sparked as a heated debate. Although contested by many that the sport is highly beneficial no matter the types, such issues are regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that doing gentle sports can be a plus rather than dangerous ones and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From the social standpoint, doing sports generally can provide a society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that becoming healthier as well as energetic and less depressed, are inextricably bound up. According to my personal experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered that every kind of sports assists the vital body organs. Thus, the beneficial consequences of high activity and moderate sports apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of risk-taking, dangerous exercises might have some negative consequences. Moreover, the fundamental aspects of some injuries and disorders related to this reality that the demerits of high risk-taking sports are dramatically remarkable. As a tangible example, a scientific research is undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downsides of this type of sports are correlated negatively with health in some cases. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived the notion of risky activities increase the rate of injuries.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of gentle sports far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of caring physical organs proved the significance of doing sport, but also decrease the rate of depression.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ted in the fact that becoming healthier as well as energetic and less depressed, a...
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Line 5, column 279, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'scientific research'.
Suggestion: scientific research
...ally remarkable. As a tangible example, a scientific research is undertaken by a prestigious universi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, kind of, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48014440433 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07304412648 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631768953069 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4798311097 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.5 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.25397266985 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0387842636096 0.242375264174 16% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.017950093115 0.0925447433944 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0214407262977 0.071462118173 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0228931045607 0.151781067708 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0154611043389 0.0609392437508 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.53 8.32886699507 126% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 55.0591133005 183% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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