Many people think regions affect successful persons. What is your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to
There is no doubt that region put an influence on the success of anyone especially, native region people have more chances of getting success than to the one who comes from the different place. This topic is always in debate whether native conditions affect the success of the individual or not? This essay will discuss some of the points discussing this topic and will try to shed light on this debate.
To begin with, there are a lot of factors, which influence the path of success, and living in the same region is one of them. While living in the same region, a person has more knowledge about the work requirements and the desired skills for the job. Having the information about these things helps a single to choose the career path according to that so anyone has more chances to get success in their life.
Moreover, living in the same habitation, a person does not have any kind of language barrier and have more influence in the society, which ultimately creates more opportunities. This further leads to getting success in the life. In addition to that, local conditions help to create more job related and education opportunities for individual and get more guidance from the people of the same field of profession. This helps to set the path in the right direction to become successful in life.
To conclude, in my opinion, success is based on the number of factors beginning from the selection of the right path and the hard work but local region plays really important and vital role in this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, really, so, while, in addition, kind of, no doubt, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76893939394 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4720864765 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511363636364 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 393.3 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0972266735 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.454545455 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.25397266985 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22538852871 0.242375264174 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934385331043 0.0925447433944 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07849502199 0.071462118173 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145481245848 0.151781067708 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581764413585 0.0609392437508 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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