Many people complain that they don’t get personal time because of work. How widespread is this view? What are the negative effects of it?
It is irrefutable to say that; these days jobs are becoming slave masters. People are spending a mammoth part of their day in their offices to meet the cut-throat competition and neglecting their personal and family life. Considering this, some analyst opine that this trend is good for our society, while others argue opposite to it. The following paragraphs will analyse the inevitable reasons, and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
Firstly, due to globalization, employees are facing competition all around the world, which instigate them to give their best. Secondly, companies are creating project deadlines too small which eventually pressurize employees to deliver their work in a short time. For example, multinational companies for their own profit put more pressure on their employee.
On the other hand, long working hours could affect person’s health and personal relations. To exemplify, American Health Associates (AHA), finds that grey matter of software engineers who sit in front of computers for longer than 11 hours daily decreases and causes memory related problems. Furthermore, when people spend long hours in the office, they get a little time to spend with their dear ones, because of it, children are deprived of the attention they deserve from their parents.
To recapitulate, proper work-life balance is essential to lead a contented life. It is hoped that, companies arrange their working hours in such a way that employees also get some time for themselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: ,
... from their parents. To recapitulate, proper work-life balance is essential to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 236.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40254237288 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9341713539 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669491525424 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0479584044 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.25 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144667883039 0.242375264174 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505846380384 0.0925447433944 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535247309006 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870629136265 0.151781067708 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468051708148 0.0609392437508 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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