Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
Neighbours play important role in our daily ife, and almost every one in the world has at least one neighbour. It is important to have good neighbors because they can make life worthwhile for us, or cause terrible problems. In my opinion, a good neighbour has high respect and is supportive. I feel this way for some reasons which I explore in the following essay.
To begin with, a good neighbour is someone who does not make a lot of noise. People believe that home is a sanctuary place to get comfortable and to release the fatigue from the bustle of the world. They do not want to be distracted by the noise of neighbours as they sleep or rest. This will not be realized if the neighbours always make a fuss when they have family problems. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was child I had the neighbour who always scream if their children did something bad or was naughty at homes. I always heared their boy crying as a result of the shouting and scolding from his parents. Moreover, it happened at midnight when almost all neighbours around them were sleeping. They do not figure out how to respect their neighbours so the people around them tried to avoid them. This example illustrate the necessity of having the neighbours which are respect people around them
In addition, a good neighbour is someone who can support us when we get trouble or emergencies. All people sometimes face big problem that cannot be handled alone. My family experience demonstrate this events when my big brother had a severe enough accident. My parents were shocked because his hand was broken, and he was brought to the hospital as soon as possible to get treatment. Consequently, I was likely to stay alone at night because my parents are going to take care of my brother at the hospital. My parents are worry because I can not stay alone at the age of seven. Suddenly, my neighbours offers to let me stay in their homes for several nights until my sibling healed and could back home. My parents entrusted me to the neighbour. For this reason, we need to to have highly supportive neighbours.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the criteria of good neighbours are both respectful and helpfulness. This is because we need serenity in our homes and we need some supports when we face problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, moreover, so, while, at least, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1904.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64390243902 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62081540912 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49512195122 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.9 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6963676503 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3333333333 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.5376344086 542% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0742941004361 0.236089414692 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0254888678344 0.076458572812 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382039489805 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.050121710753 0.150856017488 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289021314361 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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