People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent you or disagree?
It is argued that when residing their home, new residents should comply with the host country’s traditions and customs. Personally, I completely agree with this opinion for several reasons below.
On the one hand, new immigrants who adapt to the local regulation of the host country may reap many benefits for themselves . Firstly, local people might easily accept newcomers who share the common belief and etiquette with them . When long-term dwellers find the similarities and connection with the new residents, it may not be difficult for the new ones to create good relationships in society. Secondly, people coming to a new country tend to have a comfortable life and avoid social isolation if they enjoy/ follow the traditions there. For example, participating in festivals or special occasions in new nations might make new dwellers feel a sense of belonging to the community. Thus, when they can blend into the local environment, their lives tend to become more lively and energetically.
On the other hand, there might be a number of problems that new immigrants have to encounter if they do not conform to the norms of social behavior in the host country . The first issue is that the non-compliance with those rules may cause difficulties for newcomers in working with other people. In fact, there are many common ideas and opinions that people in the community all agree with. However, if the new residents reject the popular belief, this might lead to the misunderstanding and conflicts between both sides and even no agreement and cooperation. This is also the situation no one expects in the workplace as well as in the neighborhood. Another problem is that some actions will be regarded as illegal in the host country and are likely to make the community angry. For example, a foreigner who falls fouls of the local transportation law might be considered an ill-mannered citizen on the road and end up being fined.
In conclusion, I hold the view that it is essential for new residents to follow the traditions and habits in the host country in order to live in harmony with the locals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99433427762 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86900354712 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529745042493 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3336810467 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.1875 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0625 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170591716916 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588552716533 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550896753361 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118241811557 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542773861716 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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