Animals should have the same rights as the rest. Do you agree?
Saving equal rights of all animals is very important. Animals are part of out environment, part of our life, part of our planet. We must safe them and their rights unless we don't want to change climate and harm Earth which is our home.
Wild animals influence on the nature. It is believed, if some kind of animals desappears, it will change order of food chain. Changing of food chain can make huge consequences to environment, to to climate, to whole planet. We should avoid this tragedy. We should allow animals to live in their territories, to feed themselves and to breed.
Despite of this, population of people is increasing all the time. People need new territories. They should build new cities, new roads, new bridges and factories. All these harm to nature and animals. People shouls think about future generations, they must find solution which can combine both needs of people and animals simultaneosly.
More over, people must stop to catch animals and to keep them in zoo or circus. These miserable animals suffer in the cages. It is clear that we can't close all zoos, but we can reduce animals' suffering at least. Animals should be feeded and not to be harmed. They should to be capted in good conditions, which close to their natural environments.
Also people should safe rights of domestic animals. In my opinion, person that harm animals must be punished and be taken to justice.This doesn't apply to scientists. They should make experiments on the animals for providing safety of cosmetics and medicines, however they must avoit to pain animals as it possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, at least, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91078066914 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61297304659 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546468401487 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7944190816 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.9047619048 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.8095238095 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18749586371 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639881448386 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468829924084 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114274811421 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409814976494 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.31 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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