The environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems…so who do u think should be responsible for solving it? Is it the governments, organization or each individual?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today world is a colossal upsurge in the number of environment problem caused by human. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to myriad of concerns. In my opinion, this apprehension is warranted and merits serious consideration.
There are number of arguments in favour of my stance but the most preponderant one is that there are many problems related to environment which is caused by various body. In fact, Not only government is responsible for the causes of environment degradation but also every individual and organisation have same responsibility towards the environment. We can find overwhelming evidence that environment cannot improve by single body so each body need to be together to solve the global problem. Needless to say, all the merits stand environment in a good stead as far as curbing is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of this arguments is that government should maintain the rules and regulation regarding the environmental aspect. Besides, all ideas and arguments individual should also follow the rule of follow and organisation should maintain the bridge of interaction between individual and government. For example, government and individual with the help of organisation can create awareness programs. Hence, it is apparent that why many are in favour of combine work.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of mutual work are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, regarding, so, for example, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 5.75862068966 313% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 237.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25316455696 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0451567706 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565400843882 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8615900353 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.75 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214667927148 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634504872148 0.0925447433944 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640244960001 0.071462118173 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100728846182 0.151781067708 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0981840804892 0.0609392437508 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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