People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
Some behaviors of people are ever changing according to the situation and according to time. While there are some people who never changes some of their behaviors which was built on their moral principles, nowadays, mostly people tend to change even their long lasting behavior just to have a comfortable living. Therefore, I agree to the statement in a large extent that People's behavior is largely determined by forces.
For example, there are many politicians who step into politics with the motive of people welfare. And in the initial days they find it very strange to live like a rose in the middle of thorn bush. As days passes by, their moral values are compromised one by one leading into a corrupt personality as anybody in the field. Though some could argue that not every politician is like that, the reality based on the reports and facts published by news papers and various statistics is only very few politicians are exceptional to this.
To substantiate this statement, one can look none other than the example of alcohol addiction. No man or woman is taught or encouraged to consume alcohol at their home. However, once they move out, they see people, friends who either directly or indirectly persuade them to slowly compromise their usual behavior and kick start this new habit.
Furthermore, it has thought to be a wise thing to be indifferent for any social injustice happening right in front of our eyes in public. This is the extreme example of people started to change according to the external forces, because it is not human tendency to be just unemotional when some notorious evil guy harassing a lady. But, now a days it has become just opposite. A recent incident happened in India witnesses this; a South Indian celebrity was harassed in a running train during her sleep. She declares that in spite of screaming the fellow passengers in the compartment didn't respond to the incident and then she had lodge a complaint to the concerned officials.
As the above examples concrete the fact that people's behavior is influenced by forces, I agree it to a large extent though, there are some genuine people who are very skeptical about their moral values being negatively influenced by external forces.
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- Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position 34
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1856.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 378.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91005291005 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61703733442 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582010582011 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5536249943 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219830415967 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683068995637 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0928513426982 0.0758088955206 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127342074008 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114135734704 0.0667264976115 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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