some people say that cities with a taller building which means building cities vertically are good other people say that building cities horizontally is better. discuss both views and give your opinion.
Due to the constant increase in population size in past few years, shortage of land problem appeared. everyone wants their own house but due to the scarcity of land, this becomes problematic. to solve this problem, architecture and government find a unique solution, vertical building.
In my opinion, vertical buildings use land in the better way. As they accommodate more families under one roof in the small area. People from different places with different religions share their culture, customs with each other. It strengthens our society. In metro cities, more than half of population live in flats. Parking, gym swimming pool, and other fun activities and facilities are available in vertical buildings.
Apart from all advantages vertical buildings also have some drawbacks as lack of ventilation. in big cities, where vertical buildings are more, air between buildings cannot cross and this cause rise in temperature in summers.
Here, horizontal buildings have their advantage air between buildings easily cross and proper ventilation between buildings is possible. Although this horizontal buildings require more space and accommodate fewer people in the large area as compared to vertical buildings. People often build their own house which consumes more space and personal parking space, in big cities, it may be regarded a wastage of land.
In conclusion, vertical buildings are better as it provides the home to everyone and unites people together.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, apart from, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46696035242 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7395710378 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607929515419 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4126655277 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7333333333 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1333333333 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272510358013 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897339370105 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801641428093 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160834922707 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793832801173 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.85 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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