You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
The threat of nuclear weapons maintains the world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far out-weight the disadvantages.
Do you agree or disagree?
You should write at least 250 words
Many people seem to argue that maintenance of peace in our planet is possible through invention and development of nuclear weapons. Others argue that production of energy from nuclear materials can guarantee inexpensive and pollution free energy. However, I can not bring to agree with such propositions as in my opinion, the disadvantages and threats of having nuclear technology simply outnumber its advantages.
First of all, it is a kind of a paradox to say that weapons can maintain peace. If there are nuclear weapons or for that matter any weapons, then, they will be used against another country or civilians. Our history can provide many such examples that use of weapons tend to escalate war, disturb peace and invite unnecessary conflict. Therefore, having nuclear weapons and missiles is sure to bring more catastrophe in our world. For example, when a country has modern nuclear weapons, then, another country with different ideology may get threatened. The consequence of it would be that nation-states resort to arms race and the world becomes less peaceful place to inhabit.
Moving further to another argument, there are multiple dangers from nuclear power. It is worthwhile to keep in mind that we need not search for alternative sources of clean energy when we have already developed clean energy such as solar energy, wind energy and electricity from water, i.e. hydroelectricity. The power plants which use nuclear products are extremely difficult to maintain because of the threat it possesses to people in the vicinity, and to the environment. For instance, nuclear power plants turned out to be hazards during the earthquakes in Japan and many people are still suffering from radioactive waves.
To sum up, using nuclear weapons and energy are bound to create many problems and threats to humanity. It would be wise to stay away from them, and focus on effective use of traditional clean energy sources.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 23, Rule ID: KIND_OF_A[1]
Message: Don't include 'a' after a classification term. Use simply 'kind of'.
Suggestion: kind of
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Line 3, column 613, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'arm'.
Suggestion: arm
...t would be that nation-states resort to arms race and the world becomes less peacefu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18849840256 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76672520231 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571884984026 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5087508536 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.266666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211728882 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785772649668 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368278600293 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130024663528 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024581308061 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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