You are member of an organization which meets regularly at particular restuarnt. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory.
Write a letter to manager of the restaurant. In your letter
-Explain why you are writing
-Describe what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant.
Dear Sir/Madam
I am a regular customer of your premises. I am inscribing this missive as I feel the need to bring to your attention an issue I have with the service and quality of your hotel last week, when I visited your place with my community members.
Let me explain you the whole scenario. Last Saturday, when me and 4 of my friends visited for our dinner get-together at your restaurant, our experience was very disappointing. Firstly, we have to wait for almost 20-30 minutes for the waiter to have our order. Then, when we were ordering something, most of the items were not available. Moreover, one of the order came overcooked. We complaint to the waiter. He immediately replaced it with the new one. But that was totally disappointing.
We are a regular visitor of your place and your this quality and service deterioration is not acceptable to your loyal customers. I hope a prompt action from your side , so that we can plan our next meeting at your hotel soon.
Yours faithfully
Radhika
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 168, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s. I hope a prompt action from your side , so that we can plan our next meeting at...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, moreover, so, then, as to, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77840909091 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80924498478 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619318181818 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.573804879 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.6923076923 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5384615385 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13507960426 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483646938445 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424789101835 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890986619072 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0109063671935 0.0580467560999 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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