Should cigarettes and other tobacco products be outlawed?
The most alarming concern that the society faces is the use of tobacco products. This enormously results in serious health hazards and becomes an anti-environment factor as well. This essay will talk about the social and personal disadvantages caused due to the usage of these products.
Tobacco has been a major threat to all sections of people, younger to older generations. The use of tobacco causes nausea, a disorder that is related to sleeplessness and vomiting. It also hits hard on a person’s appetite, thereby creating digestion problems as well. The passive smokers, typically the non-smokers are also affected due to the inhale of carbon monoxide emitted by cigarettes.
As far as the society is concerned, smokers become the advertisers for the younger generations as well. Young children on seeing them, tend to give a try to get a feel of what and how it could be. A recently conducted research states that, 28 percent of the smokers are between the age groups 18 and 25 which contributes to 3 percent of the population. The study also concluded that 4 percent of the country’s population were diagnosed by cancer.
In my opinion, nevertheless this looks like a serious and an alarming situation. With no doubts or reservations, this anti-social ingredient should be banned and outlawed from the country as smoking causes cancer and kills. There can be awareness programmes organised across all states and cities to make the person understand about how the health condition deteriorates due to smoking.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...he non-smokers are also affected due to the inhale of carbon monoxide emitted by cigarette...
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Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[5]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'recently conducted research'.
Suggestion: Recently conducted research
...get a feel of what and how it could be. A recently conducted research states that, 28 percent of the smokers ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, nevertheless, so, well, no doubt, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1686746988 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02226380096 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630522088353 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1666558343 50.4703680194 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.9285714286 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.25397266985 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111167593323 0.242375264174 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0336124547667 0.0925447433944 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458268843376 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.060803143154 0.151781067708 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388017425456 0.0609392437508 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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