Lifestyle affects health, how should health/ medical department responds?
It is irrefutable to say that the way live conversely affect our well being. In this essay I will be discussing about different measures that a medical department should take to make people happy and deduce to a conclusion.
To begin with, way people live, what they eat consequently reflect in their health. Moreover, food intake with the adequate amount of calories, proteins, and carbohydrates that is a balance diet food and regular exercise result in the propitious health and physic of individual. For instance, the increase in the number diseases has increased in teenagers due to sedentary life has burgeoned over the past decade. So to achieve a healthy life health sector of the governing bodies should take proper care.
Firstly, not all people are aware of the food quantity and quality in their diet, thus creating awareness is the first and foremost step which is needed to be followed. Secondly, health facilities should not be bias people on the basis of their status and job so, providing health facilities irrespective of their financial status makes it more reachable to myriad people. Furthermore, only balanced diet food is not enough proper exercise need to be followed to achieve a healthy life.
To recapitulate, raising awareness about the repercussion in the health due to unhealthy lifestyle should be utmost priority of the medical department.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, conversely, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1159.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 224.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17410714286 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80003971706 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602678571429 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6249926686 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.9 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.25397266985 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249077000472 0.242375264174 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923808337214 0.0925447433944 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798377424457 0.071462118173 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159385278077 0.151781067708 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589197673806 0.0609392437508 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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