Some people believe teaching children at home is best for child development while others thing that it is important for your child to go to school discuss advantages of both and give your opinion.
Educating is very important for everyone, for kids as citizens of future it is of paramount importance. Some believe that teaching pupil at home is hte best and other contradict this opinion. This essay will look at both options, but i personally feel school teaching is superior due to professional setup.
They are numerous benefits by pupil attending school. Firstly, the teachers are well trained and qualified to nurture young lads, the time bound classes will help to grasp faster. Also, the curriculum is organized so that teachers will be more focussed on the development of he child. Secondly, children are more creative since they join along with other kids and learn faster. My so before going to school used to speak simple words but spending lot of time with his schoolmates has a tremendous impact, within a short timeframe of six months he is able to articulate the thoughts with more definiteness.
Although, institutions are available, home is the first school. The bonding between the teacher and student would be of no comparison to that of mom and son. At home we tend to be more casual and learn better, when i was a child, my mom used to spend one hour each day with me and used to make me write alphabets in a fun-way. In addition, since parents spend a lot of time with us they know a lot when compared to others and thus helps in personalised focus.
on the whole, since educational organizations are well trained and organized, along with play facilities i am of the opinion that sending childrento school would be best as spending time with similar age group makes them elated thus learn faster.
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Suggestion: of the child
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Suggestion: to better; to well
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in addition, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78723404255 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64683473568 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585106382979 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8494383438 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.846153846 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195152402346 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724058443954 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689957783112 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123408359617 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972758267997 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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