Personal Development is the base for professional development and advancing in one’s career. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recently, the phenomenon of developed personality and its corresponding impacts on enhancing the efficiency at work has sparked a heated debate. Although personal development is beneficial as it regarded by a substantial number of individuals both constructive and positive, others hold opponents views. I am inclined to believe that this development can be a plus as it could develop some brilliant aspects for its adherents.
From a social standpoint, being qualified has several advantages on work conditions. These factors are rooted in the fact of development. From my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the issues that affect efficiency. One of the paramount efffect was the knowledge, abilities, aptitudes and the awarness of employees. Hiring the well-qualified personnel affect the principles which require to develop. Fostering the productivity, diminishing the waste and enhancing the level of knowledge are the most significant factors in improving and expanding the quality in companies and reaching them to flourishing.
Furthermore, some expenditures has declined by hiring the developed employees including the cost of education. Undoubtedly, these workers do not need to instructing before their activities. In addition, the cost of reoperating or reacting has decresing as well.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the knowledgeable employees have some beneficial effect on flourishing companies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 455, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'developing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: developing
...nel affect the principles which require to develop. Fostering the productivity, diminishin...
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Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: NEED_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'need to instruct'?
Suggestion: need to instruct
...tion. Undoubtedly, these workers do not need to instructing before their activities. In addition, t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85462555066 5.00649968141 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40385845792 2.71678728327 125% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660792951542 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.3346605962 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.230769231 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4615384615 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.25397266985 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1585262701 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480369228214 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528178094973 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803222708017 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751012312762 0.0609392437508 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 53.1260098522 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.35 11.5310837438 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.95 8.32886699507 131% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 55.0591133005 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.