Information revolution has changed the way of mass communication and had some negative and positive effects on individual lives as well as on society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The phenomenon of the advantaged technology has reshaped the way people communicate forever. Yet, there are some people are concerned about the potential glitch of the elixir, while others believe in its magic which will benefit our society and well-being. As far as I am concerned, the positive effect of the Information revolution outweigh the negative ones.
To begin with, mass communication has had a long journey to reach its peak today, and thanks to the revolution of Computer that we now can easily close the geographically communicable gap between countries and countries than ever before. As the result of advantage technology, our society is having a huge benefit on its inventions such email, the Internet, social media and so on. The conventional interaction has indeed changed in a good way due to the advancements in Information Technology.
However, as we know "every coin has two sides", some individuals are against the magical elixir due to its overpowerful capability which someday will supersede many human tasks. It is believed that those people have not fully experienced the true potential of the revolution and they have missed one of the most exciting things in human history.
In conclusion, the revolution of information technology has opened uncountable possibilities for developing our society as well as our well-being. Although several negativities are merged, I believe that Information revolution will eventually be dominant and change our society forever.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45726495726 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15038433684 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7270180593 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.7 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223241275395 0.242375264174 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890814925661 0.0925447433944 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587193151483 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12975828657 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509148829454 0.0609392437508 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 53.1260098522 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.