You are invited to the old classmates party organized by an old friend. Write a letter to your friend asking him/her to join. Include following in your letter.
You will be participate in.
Tell something about your life.
Ask some information about other friends who will possibly join
Dear Bhanu,
It has been quite long since we last talked. Hope you are fine? I am also doing good in life. You will be glad to know that I recently got promoted to manager in my company. I was also given an award of employee of the year, I really felt elated because the hard work which invested for my job got acknowledged and rewarded by senior management.
I am writing this letter to share a good news, you will get exuberant after reading it. Our B.Tech batch mates are organizing a reunion party on 9th of July 2018 and I am also participating in it. So, it is a great chance to meet our all classmates, it will be a time to get lost in the feeling of nostalgia and also cherish our college days. I am really anticipating for event ardently. I would also like to you to join the same.
Till now venue has not been finalized but this get together will take place in Chandigarh only. I think it will very convenient for us to attend. Our other friends like Raman, Amit and Anurag are also coming and they told me ask you also. So, if you are coming kindly intimate me as soon as possible, so that I convey the same to organizing team, as they have to select venue according to number of people.
Hope to see you soon.
Thanking you.
Yours truly
Harry Sandhu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Tech
...l get exuberant after reading it. Our B.Tech batch mates are organizing a reunion pa...
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Line 7, column 234, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...re also coming and they told me ask you also. So, if you are coming kindly intimate ...
^^^^
Line 15, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...king you. Yours truly Harry Sandhu
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 242.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30991735537 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3229646746 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628099173554 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6336753636 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.1875 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.125 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190215823835 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621882335444 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432023582521 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944662847834 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186577920966 0.0580467560999 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.