Some people think the cheap air flight gives ordinary people freedom. However, others think the cheap air flight should be banned because it pollutes the air and brings many other problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It remains an argument about whether low-cost air transportation should be shut due to the problems it causes or allow to continue its business to benefit regular customers. In my opinion, while cheap air flight brings benefits to people, I believe such business should be discontinued because of many negative impacts.
On the on hand, cheap air flight still proves to be more demanded by a huge number of customers. Since many people cannot afford to buy expensive tickets from high quality airlines, they will have no choice but to stay with the lower service which is more affordable for the majority. A survey conducted by a renowned international organization has shown that 60 percent of air passengers are in an income group of under 50 thousand dollars per year, in which travelling with low-cost flight seems to be much more reasonable since the price ranges from only 300 to 500 dollars for one ticket. Moreover, some airlines with low price service still offer business class to the customers. Therefore, people are still able to book a better service if they demand.
On the other hand, cheap air flight is causing many severe problems to both passengers and the environment. Firstly, the amount of gas it produces is significantly harming the air. Scientists have estimated that the exhaust fumes which comes from an old Boeing 737 in a 500-kilometer trip is equivalent to the amount of gas produced by 20 cars travelling in the same distance. Thus, it could be easily assumed that cheap air flight is damaging the environment enormously. Secondly, most low-price airlines use old airplanes to minimize to the cost, which means these airlines cannot guarantee the customers a safe flight. Even with frequent maintenance, the planes’ mechanical parts still wear out after years. This leads to a risk of crashing during a flight. Therefore, shutting down this business is highly recommended for the sake of the people and the environment.
In conclusion, while many people are willing to use low-cost air flight, I believe such business should be banned to improve passengers’ experience and protect the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'continuing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: continuing
... due to the problems it causes or allow to continue its business to benefit regular custome...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11965811966 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85621025657 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566951566952 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8828275446 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.3125 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9375 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290691641295 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105478171107 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954038503558 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194966489104 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351706085386 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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