Some people think success in the life comes from hard work and determination. Others think money and appearance are more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
These days, opinion on success is divided largely. While many people argue that both hard work and determination are vital factors to lead to succeed in the practical life, others believe that money and physical beauty are more essential. In my view, I completely agree with the first statement. The essay will discuss in great detail and support for my idea.
On the one hand, there is a good reason to explain why industrious and determined people could get excellent achievement in their life. It cannot deny that only the way to success, there is no trace of lazy men. It means that as long as people do not try as they could, they will fail in their career. For example, Thomas Edison who invented many useful things which have been used until now tried to a lot of materials to look up the most suitable one to do light bulb. He said that genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration. Correct success only happens when people try the best and make up their true decision. Therefore, it is said that people are the most important factor to reach enormous achievements in the life.
On other hand, both money and appearance are believed strongly to be two essential factors to result in success. It is because providing that people have the big amount of money and good beauty, they will have many benefits in their work. For instance, they could easily make other people like and want to help them. It makes condition for them to have achievement more easily than people who do not have a lot of money and nice appearance. Thus, money and appearance have an enormous influence on achievement.
In conclusion, some people strongly believe that the most essential factors lead to good achievement are hard work and determination while others think that money and appearance are far more important. In my point, success will only happen with industrious and determined people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82317073171 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54155674891 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518292682927 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2023661903 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8888888889 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38888888889 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265310462027 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790505078607 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798644628579 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180771173028 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072870177442 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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