Television has many useful functions to play in everyone’s life, for some its relaxation, for some it is the companion. Discuss your viewpoint and support your answer with examples and discussion point.
Recently, the phenomenon of the influences of watching TV on the dwellers' lives and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate among the populations. Although this issue has several various aspects as they regarded by the substantial number of individuals both constructive and positive, some other people do not consider them. I am inclined to believe that thses efects can be plus as they could develop some brilliant aspects for their adherents.
From a social standpoint, there are several advantages on whaching the television schemes. These benefits are rooted in the fact of entertainment. From my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the useful functions of TV programs. Firstly, an array of settlers watch it for having fun and making their spare times excitment. This aspects is mostly observed in the youths and elderly citizens. Furthermore, a great deal amount of time and money is spent annually by governments in order to produce the imformative programs which are shown on TV in order to enhance the awareness and information. Inhabitants can achieve worth information and develop their public knowledge. Hence, watching TV can have educational role in our lives.
In addition, the other paramount beneficial factor of following the telivision's schems is the strong influence on people's mind. The mass media in particular television plays a pivotal role in accepting specific issues like political, economical, educational and cultural ones among the public.
In conclusion, I profoundly believe that watching TV has a number of advantageous impacts on individuals' lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 387, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...and making their spare times excitment. This aspects is mostly observed in the youth...
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Line 2, column 400, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...eir spare times excitment. This aspects is mostly observed in the youths and elder...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43243243243 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08603640571 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640926640927 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0899328101 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0825814781287 0.242375264174 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0234958014981 0.0925447433944 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277501331905 0.071462118173 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0417017946227 0.151781067708 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319809113646 0.0609392437508 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 55.0591133005 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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