It is usually foolish to get married before completing your studies and getting established in a good job. Do you agree or disagree?
Getting married before completing your studies has been the epicenter of discussion in multiple forums and a conclusive unanimous agreement is yet to be achieved. Different distinguished individuals have expressed their views both in favor and against the very idea of getting married in 20's through multiple modes of communication be it a main stream media or be it the social media. Below in essay of mine I will try to enunciate that why getting married before studies is not a good option.
The most prominent reason is that if we get married before completing our studies, than it will be difficult to manage our married life and study together. Moreover, we want to enjoy our early marriage days, with the pressure of study it is not possible. In addition, in 20's we think like a child and when you are married you have to be more responsible.
Continuing to this after marriage we need more financial support to live happily. In addition, there will be a chance that because of lack of money couple might fight and get divorced. Furthermore, we need more time to spend with family, but with study cannot cope up with the family time.
While on the other hand, there are people who will continue to wrangling about the facts of marriage before completing studies. I would like to conclude that a person should established his career first then get married, have kids and settle down is a good idea.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
... married before completing our studies, than it will be difficult to manage our marr...
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Line 7, column 208, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...should established his career first then get married, have kids and settle down i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1173.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 245.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78775510204 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60699728017 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587755102041 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3319558981 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.636363636 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2727272727 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289667377797 0.242375264174 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111009075869 0.0925447433944 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858665933918 0.071462118173 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167506377785 0.151781067708 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079239422987 0.0609392437508 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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