Since we don’t know what is going to happen tomorrow, we should focus only on the present day.’
Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience.
It has been a contentious issue that people should live life in present without thinking of upcoming days. There are different opines of every individuals. Some people think that future is uncertain so people should live their life in present time but some argue that people should always think about the future consequences of today. In this essay, there will be an examination on both side of contention, before deducing an even handed conclusion.
To commence with, there is a deluge of arguments in favor of my stance. As people said that life is uncertain as well future than why people spend their life in worries. Moreover, old religious masses said that death is the only truth of life, when a people died, he/she never foresee their death in advance, so with fear of death, people do not leave all their work or duties. Sometimes people cannot handle the pressure and get depressed which leads to myriads of health problems.
There are plethora of benefits as well as disadvantages of this phenomena of life. People can become more devoted their families or work while they live in present days. However, discussing advantages, to site an example, people save their money for future use so they can give better future to their family, if people spend all their saving while thinking that we don\’t know what is going to happen tomorrow.
To recapitulate, every coin has two faces so this statement also full of pros and cons. I strongly believe that individuals should more focus on present days because life is uncertain.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 278, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'foresees'.
Suggestion: foresees
... life, when a people died, he/she never foresee their death in advance, so with fear of...
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Line 6, column 60, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...of benefits as well as disadvantages of this phenomena of life. People can become mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93869731801 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48217911027 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593869731801 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.988110603 50.4703680194 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1538461538 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144577888765 0.242375264174 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051048937728 0.0925447433944 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471041012551 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957700224825 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447627248841 0.0609392437508 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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