Some people believe that exploring outer space is important because it expands human knowledge and might lead to discoveries that will benefit humanity in the future. Other people believe that space exploration is a waste of money that could be better spent solving immediate problems here on Earth.
Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
Whether space exploring is worth or not has been the epicenter of discussion in multiple forums and a conclusive unanimous agreement is yet to be achieved. Different distinguished individuals have expressed their views both in favor and against the very idea of space exploration through multiple modes of communication be it a main stream media or be it the social media. Below in essay of mine I will try to enunciate that space exploration is not that important because other things are much more important.
The most prominent reason is that scientists are spending so much of money on space exploration. Moreover, this money is not useful as the outcomes of these experiments are not worth. In addition, many satellites have been sending to space and photos, videos can be collected for the help of satellite. But those photos are not helpful in any experiments researchers are still assuming many things about space.
Continuing to this which money governments are spending on space experiments is waste as it can be useful to earth by finding the sources of global warming and the facts to reduce carbon emission. Moreover, government can provide good education, health benefits and good transportation system. Furthermore, can help the farmers by providing new machines and techniques which can help them to grow more lands. In addition, farming can help to reduce the global warming as well.
While on the other hand, there are people who will still continue to wrangling about the facts of space experiments. I would like to conclude that earth is more important than space so regime should spend more money to improve the health of earth rather finding the other space to live in.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, well, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.5418719212 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 282.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0390070922 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77077458325 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542553191489 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5322710755 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.307692308 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227197793675 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804430013226 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583446706503 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138718048813 0.151781067708 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632930588432 0.0609392437508 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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