Parents should be held legally responsible for children’s act. What is your opinion?
Recently, the phenomenon of legal responsibility of parents for their children and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that it will be highly beneficial for society, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that the effectiveness of this issue can be a plus and I will elaborate this in further essay.
From a social standpoint, making parents legally responsible for their children’s act can provide the community with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that merits of more careful towards their children’s action and teaching them good values , are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the influence of legally responsibility of parents in social and professional life. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both less crime in the society and inculcating moral and value in children apparently can be seen.
From a realm of parental opinion, this issue might increase the consequences of violent actions of children. Moreover, the fundamental aspects of children’s act could relate to this reality that the demerits of their mentality pertain to make them more badly. As a tangible example, some academic research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of punishing parents is correlated negatively with biased laws and regulation. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of this remarkable phenomenon
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of immense legal responsibility of parents towards their children far outweigh its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61732851986 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29862195248 2.71678728327 121% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595667870036 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.3897507372 50.4703680194 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.6 104.977214359 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7 20.9669160288 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310914785662 0.242375264174 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115283289807 0.0925447433944 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684584154683 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178568957948 0.151781067708 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470347612503 0.0609392437508 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 12.6369458128 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 53.1260098522 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.9458128079 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 11.5310837438 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.32886699507 125% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 55.0591133005 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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