As a result of advances in medical care, average life expectancy is increasing for men
and women. Do you think most people will see this as a positive development? What
are the disadvantages of an ageing population for individuals and society? Support your
point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
Recently, the phenomenon of increasing average life expectancy for men and women and its corresponding impacts have sparked a heated
debate. Although contested by many that the matter of complex procedures is highly
beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and consequently positive
by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that an ageing population for individuals and society can be a plus, and
I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a general standpoint, men and women average life expectancy increase can provide the society with some noticeable effects which
are rooted in the fact that crucial issues, as well as ultimate outcomes, are inextricably
bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed
an academic experiment which discovered current policies. Thus, beneficial ramifications
of both this common phenomenon and accordingly complicated procedures apparently
can be seen.
Within the realm of a public arena, aging population and average life expectancy are increasing for individuals and
society might increase the consequences of critical needs.
As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has
asserted that the downside of creative processesis correlated negatively with vital issues. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of this remarkable phenomenon.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly
believe that the benefits of increasing the average life expectancy for men and women far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of this unique phenomenon prove the significance of total outcomes, but also pinpoint thorny issues’ potential implications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.87169811321 5.00649968141 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25543825751 2.71678728327 120% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622641509434 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 379.143842365 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8150434104 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.454545455 104.977214359 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.9669160288 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.25397266985 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.12807881773 460% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.33497536946 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285517159403 0.242375264174 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102072064098 0.0925447433944 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0953116113923 0.071462118173 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0724034625627 0.151781067708 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090213814432 0.0609392437508 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 12.6369458128 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 53.1260098522 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.9458128079 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.06 11.5310837438 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.73 8.32886699507 129% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 55.0591133005 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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