At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
It is a fact that, population of many nations consists of large proportion of younger people than old ones. In my opinion, having more ratio of young generation than old people certainly have more benefits than the drawbacks associated with it.
The main advantage is that young people can contribute more towards the economy of the country. This is to say that young people can work more than old people. Adults are physically fit and can be more productive. As a result, young people can boost revenue for the companies they work for. As a result, overall economy growth trajectory of the country will also grow. For instance, China and India have the highest growth driven profit percentage (GDP) in the world because their 70% of the population is young adults.
The major drawback is increased crime rate because of having large ratio of young than old people. This is because young people often create nuisance in the society due to lack of guidance from their elders. In addition, many adults get influenced by wrongdoers and they even participate in antisocial activities, which deteriorate the peace of the society. For instance, as per the recent report by Times newspaper published in January 2018, it was found that the arrests made in New York City last year consists of 67% of adult criminals between 17 to 29 years of age.
To conclude, despite the drawback of antisocial problems that young people create, which can be controlled by implemention of strict law and order. I believe having larger young population is a pragmatic shift in terms of country's growth. It predicted that many countries will initiate talent based citizenship program to attract more young population from other countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for instance, in addition, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01398601399 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58409350527 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559440559441 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2920449827 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141155078343 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535178027092 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343638667265 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888753536004 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202974167759 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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