Some people believe that a crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of bad person's nature. Discuss and give your opinion.
In the contemporary life, the rising number of crimes could be considered as an alarming issue. While some individuals argue that crime is an undeniable consequence of bad person's nature, I believe that this problem is a result of social problems and poverty.
On the one hand, it is accepted that inborn characteristics could be the main reason for committing. Firstly, a person who is cruel easily commits a crime. For instance, when a child bullies his classmates, he is likely to become a crime when he grows up. Secondly, people who have bad characteristics, including selfishness and laziness could become robberies or burglaries. For example, instead of making ends meet by their own efforts, they might steal money of others to meet their own basic needs.
On the other hand, it seems to me that crime stems from social problems and poverty. Firstly, in term of social perspective, there has been a significant increase in the unemployment rate. This is the major reason explains why people work illegally to earn their livings. The second reason is due to the poverty. It is undeniable that if their living standard adversely decreases, they would do illegal activities to make money which could cover their needs and their family. For example, I have read a famous newspaper which told a story about a poor youngster. Because of a poor circumstance and his father is seriously ill, he decided to steal money from other people to rescue his father.
In conclusion, it is considered that a bad person's nature is the reason which leads to crime, I'm personally supportive of the opinion that this tendency is derived from poverty as well as negative social problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94326241135 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80468433385 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567375886525 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7280808004 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284250028812 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091475415975 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115895209555 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189591091319 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104453393656 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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