The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on above and below the surface of the earth.
The specific depiction the information round the water cycle, which explain the regular motion of the water, and the covering the earth. It is very simple and systematic presentation.
Generally, it is the sum up of the three main step forward required for the completion of water such as; evaporation, condenses, and the last one is precipitation.
At the first, the procedure of water cycle is complete and continue step by step. Therefore, the first and foremost step is evaporation. Apart from that, in under this step the collected water is heat with the help of heating of sun. Moving forward, after heating the water convert into the steam which are define as the second step that is condenses. Moving ahead, the condenses the clouds are full with the water. It is very important stage of the water.
In addition to this, the third and the last point of the procedure of water cycle is the precipitation. As a result, in this step the rain come to earth from the clouds. It is not possible without the help of first two steps. As well as, the process is repwat again and again. Because the rain is not possible without these procedure. They need this process.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'defined'.
Suggestion: defined
... water convert into the steam which are define as the second step that is condenses. M...
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Line 7, column 278, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... the process is repwat again and again. Because the rain is not possible without these ...
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Line 7, column 319, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this procedure' or 'these procedures'?
Suggestion: this procedure; these procedures
...ecause the rain is not possible without these procedure. They need this process.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, therefore, third, well, apart from, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73658536585 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56691066052 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536585365854 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6435917521 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.7333333333 112.824112599 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 22.9334400587 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20855616146 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068814844336 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761544436743 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133026345299 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790936214652 0.0819641961636 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.2329268293 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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