Working and living abroad helps us to know other cultures well. How far you think working abroad has good or bad impacts on our cultural lives?
Recently, the phenomenon of immigration in order to live and work in another country permanently and its corresponding impacts on the cultures has sparked a heated debate among the populations. Although this issue is beneficial as it regarded by the substantial number of individuals both constructive and positive, others hold opponents views. I am inclined to believe that it can be plus as it could develop some brilliant aspects for its adherents.
From a social standpoint, there are several reasons why going abroad and working in another country has some cultural advantages, and these factors are rooted in the fact of social development. From my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the benefits of this kind of migration. Firstly, it enhances the social and human development, and these people have this potential to get familiar with new and different cultures, beliefs, opinions, attitudes, behaviors and tastes by working with new dwellers and trying to communicate with them. Hence, it might be a great opportunity to develop some skills including team-working and interpersonal ones.
On the one hand, there is no doubt, the idea of living and working in another society has some opponents and they asserted that this phenomenon may have some catastrophic effects on the lives. For instance, if the people who immigrate and live or work in overseas cannot adapt themselves with new circumstances, they will put into an array of troubles including having confrontations in their families.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the merits of going overseas and work with new and different people on the culture are far more outweigh their demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, may, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 285.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31228070175 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01935074421 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59298245614 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.3293643384 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.4 104.977214359 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.9669160288 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.25397266985 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190495483367 0.242375264174 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715331772374 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058152975401 0.071462118173 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112650081334 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0084845396497 0.0609392437508 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 12.6369458128 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 53.1260098522 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.9458128079 141% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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