Parents must be involved in their children's education in order to make them successful.
I don’t think that parents should be overly involved in their child’s future because of the differences in the interest between the parents and their children. They might even want to be independent in their life and always being involved in each of their decisions may cause a lot of frustration and restrictions in their decision making ability.
Being over indulgent in children’s life does not help, especially when children’s have separate interests. Many parents want to be too much involved in the child’s future, about what they want to do and what they want to become. Sometimes these are the dreams of the parents that they could never achieve and want their children to fulfill for them. In these situations, parents force the children to follow their path. However, the persuasive nature of parents can engender lot of frustration’s in their child. The parents are not thinking about the future of their children but instead are trying to fulfill their own desire. This behavior of the parents can also bring an equal desire of the children to make their parents happy, but it is rarely the case.
Many children have a dream of being independent and make own decisions about the future life. They want to live life the way they want. For example, most of the children instead of studying their colleges in a nearby place along with their parents, they want to be self-dependent figure out various complexities of life on their own by studying in a different state or even other countries. This is the best way they can figure out their life find the best interest in them. However, many parents think that their children are premature and think they are not capable of standing on their own feet. Thus, for parents being over indulgence on their children can have can have a negative impact that they are incompetent and unable to accomplish on their own.
Thus, instead of guiding their children in every point in their life they should support the decisions made by their children. They should have confidence in their children and provide support their children especially in the time of their needs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 658, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'can have'.
Suggestion: can have
...being over indulgence on their children can have can have a negative impact that they are incompe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 361.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95844875346 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66896320976 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.415512465374 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 536.4 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0387457169 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.294117647 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2352941176 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94117647059 5.21951772744 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38420651251 0.243740707755 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170028861938 0.0831039109588 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706212341361 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298881690783 0.150359130593 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843934793972 0.0667264976115 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 100.480337079 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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